Criteria
Yes
No
1. You used capital letters at the beginning of the paragraphs, after periods, and when using proper nouns.
2. The text had a tittle.
3. Your sentences had the correct structure in future perfect:
Subject + will + have + verb -ing
As well as the conjunctions: By and When
4. Your ideas given in the directions are used.
5. You wrote at least eight sentences or more.

Excellent performance! You are awesome, outstanding job! Keep the nice work and effort! You did it excellently, however you should pay close attention to the format, structure and indications you were asked for. Fabulous! Very good! Your writing is now excellent. There is always something that can be corrected, but you are positively answering what asked in the topic. Congratulations!