Criteria
Yes
No
CONTENT
Your topic and the main idea were clear.
ORGANIZATION
You wrote sentences and paragraphs that were understandable and had logical sequence.
VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR
You used verbs and grammar related to passive voice in present continuous tense.
SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION
You used words correctly spelled and punctuation marks.

There are some aspects you should be careful. Maybe it is necessary to study again the content section. Not answering or missing information will take points away. You are getting better at writing a story, unfortunately is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about, pay attention to the correct use of grammar tenses, adverbial phrases, spelling and punctuation. Excellent! Your writing is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly answering what is being asked and you have used grammar tenses in the right way as well as passive voice in present continuous.