You still need to work on the fluency of your speech. You have the idea now it is time to organize all of then in a coherent way in order to express yourself clearly. It is also important for you to give the proper intonation to the sentences to give extra expression to your ideas. You are definitely improving but there are still some aspects you need to cover in order to make it perfect. It is important for you to avoid hesitation which comes after practicing a few times before you record yourself. Very good! Your speaking is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly answering what is being asked and you have also paid attention to the topic. Congratulations!