Criteria
Excellent
Acceptable
Not acceptable
Use of English
Task accomplishment
Organization
Use of “since and for”

Not good! You need to practice everything again and learn how to structure sentences. You won’t regret if you do some study!) It was OK but you could be a better writer. You did not pay attention to all the elements mentioned in the rubric. Before doing the final writing analyze if it has everything needed. Excellent! You followed all the instructions and your ideas were clear. Good use of grammar and vocabulary. Good job!